Surrender … a poem

March 9, 2011

Surrender

Manifest what you want”, she said.
“Surrender”, is what I said in return … to a life
creative inventive
giving caring
lively joyful
whole complete
grounded but dreamy
loving so sweet
quite smile sparkly
explosive vibrant
slow flowing movement
happily in joy
Enjoy the gift ….

Life love
Cool with warmth
Heart cuddling –
A sweet cradle
A hand A hold
A gesture
So generous – Lovely Lovely
Alone Together ….
Surrender.

“Surrender”, she said
“surrender”, I said in return…to a life
To God
To journeys, to exploration –
That’s all there is…
A creative mark
A thumb print –
To celebrate to share
To reflect…
Remembering birth
Dancing with wind
Glow in the light
Of a simple moon
Floating, Floating
On a wave lit with foam –
Acceptance Forgiveness
and giving love
Unconditional love.

“Surrender” I said again.
Surrender in return.

Paz Nov. 2008

2 Responses to “ Surrender … a poem ”

  1. DJ on March 10, 2011 at 11:07 pm

    Thank you that is beautiful!
    Boy isn’t that the truth!!!
    ;-)
    I have been reading about Siddhartha and that was the main point, to Surrender!

  2. Trip on March 10, 2011 at 11:12 pm

    Thank you! That poem just flowed!

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